The trip (7)
The next day, my father and I went up the mountain with the crowd to see the sun rises. When I got up there, it was very very cold, I wore my scarf, sweater, and sitting on the plank road with friction my hand, but they didn't even work. So the time that I hoped was the sunshine. After the waiting(as I was ready to give it up), the sun rises. The sunshine irradiated on my face and I said, " what a great moment!"The cabins and the river which is down the mountain turns to gold.
Soon, the sun is hung on the sky and the crowd was almost left.but, we were not, we sat in the grass and took flowers with tied them. "I gonna give them to my dear mom!"
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The trip (7)
The next day, my father and I went up the mountain with the crowd to see the sun rises sunrise. When I got up there, it was very very cold, I wore my scarf and sweater, and sitting on the plank road with friction my hand I was rubbing my hands together, but that didn't even work. So the time that I hoped was the sunshine. After the waiting ages (as I was ready to give it up), the sun rises rose. The sunshine irradiated shone on my face and I said, "What a great moment!" The cabins and the river which is was down the mountain turned to gold.Soon, the sun was hung high in on the sky and the crowd was had almost left, but we were still there. We sat in the grass and picked flowers with tied them. "I'm gonna give them to my dear mom!"
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