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The story of a dog. The dog was running after a ball, it had got used to fetched a stick, therefore he didn't see that the ball was bouncing up from the bridge and fell into the river. After a few seconds of uncertainty, it sniffed the floor and found the ball. It leaped over the bridge and despite the river's current, fetched the ball back to his master.

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The story of a dog.

The dog was running after a ball. It had got used to fetching a stick, therefore it didn't see that the ball was bouncing up from the bridge and fell into the river.
After a few seconds of uncertainty, the dog sniffed the ground and found the scent of the ball.
The dog then leaped over the bridge and despite the river's current, fetched the ball back to its master.


You can say either "it" or "he" to refer to the dog, but you have to be consistent. Don't first say "it" and then say "he".

"Floor" is INSIDE a building. "Ground" is OUTSIDE.

(Inside a house, you stand on the FLOOR. Outside in the street, you stand on the GROUND).

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The story of a dog.

The dog was running after behind a the ball, it had got he used to fetched a stick, therefore he didn't see that the ball was bouncing up from the bridge and fell into the river.
After a few seconds of uncertainty, it sniffed the floor and found the ball.
It leaped over the bridge and despite the river's current, fetched the ball back to his master.
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The story of a dog.

The dog was running after a ball, it had got gotten used to fetched  fetching a stick, therefore he didn't see that the ball was bouncing up from the bridge and fell into the river.
After a few seconds of uncertainty, it sniffed the floor and found the ball.
It leaped over the bridge and despite the river's current, fetched the ball back to his master.
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Hello Jemery, si tu veux des cours d'anglais, let me know je suis francais et bilingue anglais, j'ai vecu a NYC ;)

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