Search from various English teachers...
Portugal flagPedro Carneiro
足球比赛. 今天我是在这个很美丽的海滩。我跟我的朋友来, 我们留在这里到日落并做烧烤. 我们会煮一些肉和青椒. 现在我们开始跟刚遇到的一些人一起踢足球。 Today I am at this amazing beach. I came with my friends, we will stay until the sun set and prepare a barbecue over here! We will cook some meat and green peppers. Right now we are starting to play football together with some people that we just met.

Corrections · 13

2

足球比赛.

今天我是在这个很美丽的海滩。我跟我的朋友来, 我们留在这里到日落并做烧烤. 我们会煮一些肉和青椒. 现在我们开始跟刚遇到的一些人一起踢足球。

和朋友一起在海滩

今天我待在这个美丽的海滩,我是跟朋友一起来的。我们会在这儿待到太阳下山然后做烧烤,我们会烤肉和青椒。现在我们要开始和刚认识的人一起踢足球。

0

足球比赛.

今天我在这个美丽的海滩。我是跟我的朋友一起来的。 我们想一直待到太阳下山而且打算吃烧烤. 我们会煮一些肉和青椒. 现在我们开始跟刚遇到的人一起踢足球。( It sounds more native now.)

Today I am at this amazing beach. I came with my friends, we will stay until the sun set and prepare a barbecue over here! We will cook some meat and green peppers. Right now we are starting to play football together with some people that we just met.
0

足球比赛.

今天我和我的朋友来到了一个美丽的海滩,我是在这个很美丽的海滩。我跟我的朋友来,我们边欣赏夕阳西下的美景边烧烤,烤些肉和青椒。 我们留在这里到日落并做烧烤. 我们会煮一些肉和青椒. 现在我们正在跟开始跟刚遇到认识的一些人朋友一起踢足球呢。

Today I am at this amazing beach. I came with my friends, we will stay until the sun set and prepare a barbecue over here! We will cook some meat and green peppers. Right now we are starting to play football together with some people that we just met.

0

足球比赛

我今天和朋友来到一个美丽的海滩,我们一直在这边待到日落,也在海滩上做烧烤,我们煮了一些肉和青椒。

现在,我们要和刚刚遇到的人一起踢足球。

Today I am at this amazing beach. I came with my friends, we will stay until the sun set and prepare a barbecue over here! We will cook some meat and green peppers. Right now we are starting to play football together with some people that we just met.

0
:)

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today