Civil Engineering
My name is Ahmed. I'm studying civil engineering.Civil engineering is not an interesting department at least for me.I'm studying it, because my university has only two departments and Civil engineering is appealing to me more than the other department.I want to study mechanical engineering, but it's not an option now, so I must adapt with my department.
On the other hand, Civil engineers are in demand in most of countries which makes me happy, because I want to work in Europe, so I must do my best to achieve my goals.I decided to continue my education and I hope one day I can study abroad.
Improving my English is an important step to study abroad.I'm also studying Deutsch for the same purpose.Learning languages is very interesting but hard at the same time.
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Civil Engineering
My name is Ahmed. I'm studying civil engineering. Civil engineering is not an interesting department, at least for me. I'm studying it, because my university has only two departments, and civil engineering is more appealing to me more than the other department.I want to study mechanical engineering, but it's not an option now, so I must adapt with my department.On the other hand, Civil engineers are in demand in most of countries, and this makes me happy, because I want to work in Europe, so I must do my best to achieve my goals.I decided to continue my education and I hope I can study abroad one day.
Improving my English is an important step to study abroad. I'm also studying Deutsch for the same purpose. Learning languages is very interesting but hard at the same time.
Nicely written! Mainly punctuation errors, and I rearranged+rephrased some words to make it sound more like fluent English.
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Civil Engineering
My name is Ahmed. I'm studying civil engineering. Civil engineering is not an interesting subject, at least for me. I'm studying it, because my university has only two subjects and civil engineering is more appealing to me than the other subject.I want to study mechanical engineering, but it's not an option now, so I must adapt to the subjects that are available to me.On the other hand, civil engineers are in demand in most of countries, which makes me happy, because I want to work in Europe, so I must do my best to achieve my goals. I decided to continue my education and I hope one day I can study abroad.
Improving my English is an important step to studying abroad. I'm also studying Deutsch German for the same purpose. Learning languages is very interesting, but hard at the same time.
You need to always put a space after the full stop that comes at the end of each sentence.
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