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My son's birthday. Today is my son's birthday. As the birthday tradition, my wife prepared a special soup with sea weed. It is called as Miyekgook in Korean. We frequently have it daily life, but we have it at the birthday breakfast. The idoine ingredient is very good for mother who born a baby. Actually, this soup is for mother rather than her son or daughter. Anyway, we enjoyed it. As the special event, my wife and I gave some pocket money to my son to enjoy with his friends. He was very delighted it. After breakfast, all my family went to their destinations. My first son went to library to study. My second son went out to meet his friends. My wife also went out to meet a woman who was our neighborhood. I also will go out to go the public library. I will borrow some books. I made a resolution to read a book per week. I read a book last week. So, I will borrow new book to read during this week. We all will meet at 6 P.M to have a dinner together. It will be a happy time for my family.

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My son's birthday.

Today is my son's birthday. As the birthday tradition, my wife prepared a special soup with sea weed. It is called as Miyekgook in Korean. We frequently have it daily life, but we have it at the birthday breakfast. The idoine ingredient is very good for mother who born a baby. Actually, this soup is for mother rather than her son or daughter. Anyway, we enjoyed it. As the special event, my wife and I gave some pocket money to my son to enjoy with his friends. He was very delighted it. After breakfast, all my family went to their destinations. My first son went to library to study. My second son went out to meet his friends. My wife also went out to meet a woman who was our neighborhood. I also will go out to go the public library. I will borrow some books. I made a resolution to read a book per week. I read a book last week. So, I will borrow new book to read during this week. We all will meet at 6 P.M to have a dinner together. It will be a happy time for my family.


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My Son's Birthday

Today is my son's birthday. As a birthday tradition, my wife prepared a special soup with seaweed. It's called Miyeokguk in Korean. We eat seaweed soup for breakfast on our birthdays, and we also often eat it on non-special days as well. Seaweed contains iodine, which is very good for mothers who just gave birth. Actually, eating this soup is more beneficial for mothers who just gave birth than it is for the children they birthed. But we still enjoy eating it. Since it was his birthday, we gave him some money to enjoy with his friends. He was so delighted with it. After breakfast, my family members all went out on their own. My oldest son went to the library to study. My youngest son went out to meet his friends. My wife also went out to meet a neighbor. And I will go out to the public library to borrow some books. I made a resolution to read one book a week. I read one last week, so I will borrow a new book to read this week. Our family will all meet back up at 6 P.M. to have dinner together. We will have a great time together. 


Sounds like a nice day for your family. Good luck with your reading resolution :)

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My son's birthday.

Today is my son's birthday. As a birthday tradition, my wife prepared a special soup with seaweed. It is called as Miyekgook in Korean. We (frequently) have it daily life, but we also have it as a birthday breakfast. The iodine ingredient is very good for amother who recently gave birth to a baby. Actually, this soup is for the mother rather than her son or daughter. Anyway, we enjoyed it. 

At the special event, my wife and I gave some pocket money to my son to enjoy with his friends. He was very delighted it. After breakfast, all of my family (my entire family)  went to their destinations (left). My first son went to library to study. My second son went out to meet his friends. My wife also went out to meet a woman who was in our neighborhood. I also will go out to go the public library. I will borrow some books. I made a resolution to read a book per week. I read a book last week. So, I will borrow a new book to read (during) this week. We all will meet at 6 P.M to have a dinner together. It will be a happy time for my family.

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