What is Anticitera?
Anticitera is considered the first computer of the humanity. It was made in Greece one century BC.
It was discovered in the bottom of a river after a strong rain. A fisher discovered this machine but It was very fragile. A scientists grupo fount it and took it a laboratory. In the laboratory, they made a lot of proof and discovered the feactures of this wonderwall machine.
The internet have a lot of information about this and It is a very interesting matter. I was knew this discovery last day and I exiting to research the machine. I think that this invention helped to make the world that I know now.
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What is Anticitera?
Anticitera is considered the first computer of the humanity. It was made in Greece circa 1000 BC.It was discovered at (we use "at" to refer to a specific location or spot) the bottom of a river after a strong rain. A fisherman discovered the machine but it was very fragile. A team of scientists grupo found it and took it to a laboratory. In the laboratory, they made a lot of discoveries and discovered the features of this wonderful machine.
The Internet has ("Internet" is a global network of computers and data and is a singular noun. Therefore, we use "has".) a lot of information about this discovery and it is a very interesting matter. I was knew came across (we use "came across" to describe something that we got to know incidentally) this discovery yesterday and I exiting to researched on the machine excitedly. I think that this invention helped to shape (we use "shape" as a verb here to refer to an influence over something and possibly changing how that thing evolves in the future) the world that I now know now.
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What is Anticitera?
Anticitera is considered to be the first computer of the humanity. It was made in Greece in the first one century BC.It was discovered in the bottom of a river after a strong rain. A fisherman discovered found this machine, but It was very fragile. A group of scientists scientists grupo fount found it and took it a laboratory. In the laboratory, they did made a lot of tests proof and discovered the feactures features of this wonderwall wonderful machine.
The internet has have a lot of information about this, and It it is a very interesting matter. I was knew found out about this discovery last day yesterday and I was exiting excited to research the machine. I think that this invention helped to make the world that I know now.
Thanks for reading and correcting my noteboook.
Bye.
Buen trabajo y buena continuación!
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