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Could you correct my book report ? Title : The Duck Race Setting : At the stream Characters : Mum and children Beginning story : Mum had an idea. The children made six ducks. Mum began the race. Middle story : Mum's duck sank. Chip's duck got stuck in the reeds. Biff's duck got stuck in the weeds and Wilf's duck got stuck on a log. End story : Two swans landed on the ducks and six ducks got soggy. My favorite part of the story is that the ducks went down the stream. My opinion : I think mom and children had a fun even though all ducks got in trobule.

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Could you correct my book report ?

Title : The Duck Race

Setting : At the stream

Characters : Mum and children

Story start : Mum had an idea. The children make six ducks. Mum begins the race.

Middle story : Mum's duck sinks. Chip's duck gets stuck in the reeds. Biff's duck gets stuck in the weeds and Wilf's duck gets stuck on a log.

End story : Two swans land on the ducks and six ducks get soggy.

My favorite part of the story is where the ducks went down the stream.

My opinion : I think mom and children will have fun even though all the ducks get in trouble.

Very well written!

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