coffee shop
I went to my home town today.
I went to my favorite coffee shop and I ate a baked sandwich and a banana juice.
It was delicious.
The shop is my favorite place because when I was a child, my family often went to there.
The time has past over 20 years, but the shop opens with the same menu and same taste.
These days many shop and cafe closed and changed in my home town.
Therefore I' m happy for not changing the shop and the shop was crowded by many customers.
It reminds me of my childhood and I can relax.
I rarely order a cup of coffee because I feel stomachache when I drink it.
I like banana juice.
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coffee shop
I went to my home town today.I went to my favourite coffee shop and I ate a baked sandwich and a banana juice, it was delicious.
The shop is my favorite place because when I was a child, my family often went there.
The time has past over 20 years but the shop still opens with the same menu and same taste.
These days, many shops and cafes have closed and changed in my home town.
Therefore, I'm happy my favourite shop hasn't changed and is still busy, full of customers.
It reminds me of my childhood and I can relax.
I rarely order a cup of coffee because it gives me a stomach ache when I drink it.
I prefer banana juice.
Really good, only a couple of minor changes needed, made perfect sense without any changes so well done!
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Coffee Shop
I went to my home town today.I went to my favorite coffee shop and I ate a baked sandwich and drank a banana juice.
It was delicious.
The shop is my favorite place because when I was a child, my family often went to there.
Over 20 years have passed, but the shop is still open with the same menu and the same taste.
These days many shops and cafes have closed and changed in my home town.
Therefore I'm happy that the shop has not been changed and that it was full of customers.
It reminds me of my childhood and I can relax.
I rarely order a cup of coffee because I get a stomach ache when I drink it.
I like banana juice instead.
"Passed" is a past participle of a verb.
"Past" is an adjective.
Therefore, you cannot write "the time has past". You must write "the time has passed".
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