第一：朋友们好！
大家好！我是四年级的美国大学生. 下个学期我会开始第四年级的中文课。中国文化对我很有意思。我去年秋天在北京大学留学了。我去过西安, 程度, 乐山，丽江，大里，和昆明。我希望毕业后去中国。
你喜欢吃什么样的菜？ 什么引起你的兴趣？你的理想是什么？
我很想跟你说说！
- 韩小燕
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你喜欢吃什么样的菜？ 什么引起你的兴趣？你的理想是什么
- 韩小燕
dear American friends 韩小燕
in fact , I also don't know myself to like what to eat vegetables. Because I only eat Chinese cuisine until today.So I want to eat your American food . are you can introduce some food you like.The present ideal is i can with fluent English.
- 韩小燕
dear American friends 韩小燕
in fact , I also don't know myself to like what to eat vegetables. Because I only eat Chinese cuisine until today.So I want to eat your American food . are you can introduce some food you like.The present ideal is i can with fluent English.
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Added a bit,is "程度" means "成都"？
how funny u r！^o^
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“中国文化对我很有意思”这句不太恰当，应该是“我觉得中国文化很有意思”，
“什么引起你的兴趣”这句也不恰当，应该是“什么能够引起你的兴趣”。
呵呵，ur chinese is very good,and i'm lived in chongqing,it's a beautiful city,welcome to china,welcome to Western China!
I like Sichuan dish,do you like it?
I'm interesting in computer,what about u?
My ideal is to be an useful person in society,what about u?
i like barley,it's a simple plant,because when it matured,it always lower it's head,in Chinese it means modest,and modesty is the traditional virtue of Chinese people,so i named myself Barley,u can call me Barley.
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第一：朋友们好！
大家好！我是四年级的美国大学生. 下个学期我会开始第四年级的中文课。中国文化对我很有意思。我去年秋天在北京大学留学了。我去过西安,你喜欢吃什么样的菜？ 什么引起你的兴趣？你的理想是什么？
我很想跟你说说！
- 韩小燕
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中文不错，要是能注意下你的标点符号的使用也许更好。在“我去过西安，成都，乐山，丽江，大理，和昆明”这句，使用了不符合中文习惯的标点，应该成“我去过西安、成都、乐山、丽江、大理和昆明”。
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