My Journal August 3rd

Hi. This is Aoi. I want to talk about household chores today.
Have you ever helped your parents do chores? In my case, I said " Yes, I have."
I think helping do household chores at an early age is common in Japan and employing a maid is not popular in Japan. 

[This is not wrong, but a little awkward, especially repeating "in Japan." I might say "where employing a maid is not popular."]

I think it has there are many benefits to teaching kids to do chores when they are young age.
The first one is they can become independent easily, the second one is they can become responsible and the last one is they are able to take care of their own family and other people when they grow up! 

[ I would simplify it to First they, second they, and finally they.]

Now, I live alone away from my sweet family. I can survive in the complex city of Tokyo to do every chores by myself. Despite this self-sufficiency I miss my family and think I want to go back to my home town.
I think I'm a lucky girl because I learned how to do chores before I was on my own and I know it now!!!

My Journal August 3rd

Hi. This is Aoi. I want to talk about house chores today.
Have you ever helped your parents do chores? In my case, I said " Yes, I have."
I think helping (to do) house chores at an (early) age is common in Japan and (hiring) a maid is not popular in Japan.
I think it has many benefits to teach kids to do chores when they are (still at a) young age.
The first one is (that) they can become independent (more) easily, the second one is (that) they can (learn to) become (responsible) and the last one is they are able to take care of their own family and other people when they grow up!
Now, I live alone away from my sweet family. I can survive in the complex city of Tokyo (and) do every chores by myself , Despite (this)I miss my family and think I want to go back (to) my home town.
I think I'm a lucky girl becuse I learned how to do (chores) before and I know it now!!!