Should we help the others instantly when they are in danger or observe the situation first?
I advise we should observe the situation before helping the people who are in danger.
First, we had better realize whether we have the ability to help other people who are in danger. For example, I see a person who is drowning, but I can’t swim. The first thing I should do, I think, is to call for help, instead of dropping into the water.
Secondly, we need to find a proper way. For example, a person lying on the ground needs help. I shouldn’t move him/her, if he/she is fracture, otherwise it may worsen the condition. A proper way is to call 911 right away.
In conclusion, observing the dangerous situation first, and then trying to find the most proper way to help people who are in danger is the wise choice.
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Should we help the others instantly when they are in danger or observe the situation first?
I advise think we should observe the situation before helping the people who are in danger.First, we had better realize think about whether we have the ability to help other people who are in danger. For example, I see a person who is drowning, but I can’t swim. The first thing I should do, I think, is to call for help, instead of dropping jumpinginto the water.
Secondly, we need to find a the proper way to help them. For example, a person lying on the ground needs help. I shouldn’t move him/her, becauseif he/she is has a fracture, otherwise it may worsen the condition. A The proper way is to call 911 right away.
In conclusion, observing the dangerous situation first, and then trying to find the most proper best way to help people who are in danger is the wiser choice.
Well done, Jason! This was excellent. One thing you could try to improve on is not repeating a word too many times. You can look up words in a thesaurus and find words that mean the same thing to add variety to your writing!
-Miki :)
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