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Hello eveyone, could you please help me with this email? Thank in advance
"Good morning,
sorry for the delay in reply but I was collecting all the information to produce a single document to send you.
In this document you can find, for each store, the date when the ordinary maintenance was executed and, where we did an extra, the description and the amount of this activity.
In attached I send you all the reports of the ordinary maintenance executed.
Don’t hesitate to contact me if you have another requests.
Thank you,
Giovanni"
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Email revision
Hello eveyone, could you please help me with this email? Thank in advance"Good morning,
Sorry for the delay in replying but I was collecting all the information to produce a single document to send you.
In this document you can find, for each store, the date when the ordinary maintenance was executed and, where we did an extra, the description and the amount of this activity.
Attached, you can find all the reports of the ordinary maintenance executed.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have another request.
Thank you,
Giovanni
[Very well written, just a couple of changes to make it sound more natural. Also one change to make it sound more polite and formal, other than that, very well written email.]
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