Shenyang- a northeast city of China

Shenyang- a northeast city of China

The city of Shenyang, is a city which is located in the northeastern part of China. Most people in that city, work in state owned company or factories. The people of Shenyang seem much happier and less pressured when compared with those of either Beijing or Shanghai. The economic outlook is not as good these years, and it is not very easy to find a job. Though it is the capital city of the province of Liaoning, the food is much cheaper, the traffic is less and real estate costs are lower than the other big cities. Shenyang is also the home of Emperor Nuerhachi. The people are the best feature of this city, and because of the beautiful snow and hotsprings clubs, most people find it pleasent to visit in the winter.

Your paragraph can stay intact without starting new lines, since the "subject" of Shenyang the city never changes topic. If for instance you started speaking about the Emperor more, you could write this as a separate paragraph, but since he is mentioned as a "feature" of the city, the subject stays the same. Typically in English if we use a title such as Emperor or President, the first letter of the "title" is capitalized. I assumed in my revision that you meant hotsprings when you used the words (spring club). Very interesting city, I would love to visit it someday!