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Diary 01.08.2017 A mouse appeared in the living room accidentally My mother doesn't like mice, and she really dislike this creature a lot. Every time when I heard that she was mentioning some mice are activating around outside of our house, and I always listened then had whisper in my mind said ''Don't worry, Mom they will never hide in our house.'' What a surprise today, It was after the TV series and before she was about going upstairs to sleep, there was a mouse came from nowhere and she saw it when it was taking a walk and run in the living room. And then my old Mom called me to the living room and to catch the mouse. Before I got to the living room I heard a yelling about ''mouse", at the moment I though I might be a big one, a rate or some kind of big mouse. But when I found it behind the cabinet, it was small and panic and eager to break away. I had never wanted to catch a mouse like that, even my old Mom wanted me to do that. Now I am wondering what she wanted to do with it after I cough it? I guess she was going to kill it by mutilating if I cough it. Eventually, I didn't catch it and I let it run away from the front door. Just in the case, mu mom closed the outer door and the inner sliding doors tidy for keeping it away from here.

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Diary 01.08.2017

A mouse appeared in the living room accidentally

My mother don't like mice. She really dislike them. Whenever​ I hear her talk about mice coming around our house, and I always listened. Then I do  whisper in my mind saying; ''Don't worry Mom, they will never hide in our house.''

What a surprise today!  After a TV series, as she was about going upstairs to sleep, a mouse came from nowhere. She saw it run in the living room. Then my old mom called me to the living room to catch the mouse. Before I got to the living room I heard someone yelling, ''mouse!". At that moment, I thought​ it might be a big one.  A rat or some kind of big mouse. But when I found it behind the cabinet, it was small and panicky.  It was eager to break away.

I had never wanted to catch a mouse like that, despite my old Mom wanted me to do that. Now I am wondering what she wanted to do with it after I caught​ it. I guess she was going to kill it by mutilating if I caught​ it.

Eventually, I let it run away from the front door. In case, my mom closed the outer door and the inner sliding doors tight to prevent it from sneaking away.
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Diary 01.08.2017 A mouse appeared in the living room accidentally

My mother doesn't like mice; she really dislikes these creatures a lot. Every time when I heard her mentioning that some mice were showing up around the outside of our house, I always listened and heard a whisper in my mind say ''Don't worry, Mom, they will never hide in our house.''

What a surprise we had today. After the TV series had ended and before she was about going upstairs to sleep, there was she saw a mouse come out of nowhere and watched it run into the living room. And then my old Mom called me to the living room to catch the mouse. Before I got to the living room, I heard her yelling ''mouse."  At the moment, I thought it might be a big one, some kind of bigger mouse. But when I found it behind the cabinet, it was small, panicking and eager to break away.

I had never wanted to catch a mouse like that, even though my old Mom wanted me to do that. Now, I am wondering what she wanted to do with it after I caught it? I guess she was going to kill it or mutilate it if I caught it.

I didn't catch it and eventually it ran away through the front door. Just in case, my mom closed the outer door and the inner sliding doors to keep it away from here.

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