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Could you correct my book report ? Book Report Title : Pirate Mom Characters : Pete, Pete’s mom, Amazing Marco Setting : At Pete’s home, At the magic show, At the hospital Problem : Pete’s mom turned into a pirate. Solution : Pete asked Amazing Marco to help his mom back again. Summary : Pete’s mom gave tickets to Pete for a magic show as a surprise so they went to the show. When It was time for Hypno-Trance magic, The Amazing Marco picked Pete’s mom and turned her into a pirate. but he ran off the stage in a hurry when he heard that his wife was having the baby. Pete’s mom was still a pirate. The Amazing Marco’s helper Zelda told Pete that the magic spell would wear off most of the time. Pete’s mom acted like a pirate. Pete was worried his mom so he went to find The Amazing Marco to the hospital. He said sorry to Pete and he turned his mom back again and Pete’s mom woke up. The next day, Pete got a letter from the Amazing Marco. He sent the letter because he felt sorry about Pete’s mom and also there were two bits of paper in the envelope. They were tickets for The Amazing Marco’s next show. Pete’s mom said “Oh, no”. My opinion : I think Pete was a prankster but he behaved responsibly. He wanted his mom to be a pirate because he liked playing pirates. but he realized that his mom had a problem. He tried to find a way to solve. It was really funny when Pete’s mom was frightened by the letter from the magician.

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Book Report

Title : Pirate Mom

Characters : Pete, Pete’s mom, Amazing Marco

Setting : At Pete’s home, At the magic show, At the hospital

Problem : Pete’s mom turned into a pirate.

Solution : Pete asked Amazing Marco to help his mom back again.

Summary :

Pete’s mom gave tickets to Pete for a magic show as a surprise so they went to the show. When It was time for Hypno-Trance magic, The Amazing Marco picked Pete’s mom and hypnotized her into being a pirate. but he ran off the stage in a hurry when he heard that his wife was having their baby. Pete’s mom was still a pirate.

The Amazing Marco’s helper, Zelda, told Pete that magic spells wear off most of the time. Pete’s mom was still acting like a pirate. Pete was worried about his mom so he went to find The Amazing Marco at the hospital. He told Pete he was sorry and turned his mom back to normal and she woke up.

The next day, Pete got a letter from the Amazing Marco. He sent the letter because he felt sorry about Pete’s mom and included in the envelope two bits of paper. They were tickets for The Amazing Marco’s next show. Pete’s mom said “Oh, no!” 

My opinion :

I think Pete was a prankster but he behaved responsibly. He wanted his mom to be a pirate because he liked playing pirates, but he realized this gave his mom a problem which he tried to solve. It was really funny the way Pete’s mom was frightened by the letter from the magician.

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