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National festival I have seen a lot of events in my life and I have one favorite. This is national event called "Sabantui". The festival celebrates in one part of Russia where lives two nationalities - the Tatarian and the Baskir. This festival is dedicated to dropping of harvest and land fertility. The festival starts in the early morning and finishes about midnight. People celebrate in the countryside in the wood. There are three parts of festival: national jokes, food and a concert. National food is based on the meat of lamb. Food is very fat and people eat hot dish. There are also national drinks like a tea with healing herb and some specific drink done with milk. In the concert people dance and sing, Children take part in a competition and sin national songs. The best singer win a lot of toys and sweets. For adults there are sport competition: a races with eggs, a battle with pillow, skipping in sack ecc. The strongest, the fast and more sporty win... sheep! I like this festival. I have always taken part in all competitions and I have always won especially when I was singing.

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National festival

I have seen a lot of events in my life and I have a favorite one. This is a national event called "Sabantuy". The festival is celebrated in one part of Russia where lives two nationalities - the Tatars and the Bashkir. This festival is dedicated to the harvest season and land fertility.

The festival starts in the early morning and finishes at around midnight. People celebrate in the countryside in the woods.

There are three parts of the festival: national jokes, food, and a concert.

The national food is based on the meat of lamb meat. This food is very fat and people eat hot dishes. There are also national drinks like herbal tea with healing properties and some specific drink made with milk.

In the concert, people dance and sing. Children take part in a competition and sing national songs. The best singer wins a lot of toys and sweets.

For adults, there are sports competitions: a race with eggs, a battle with pillows, skipping in a sack etc. The strongest, fastest and sportiest win... sheep!
I like this festival. I have always taken part in all of its competitions and I have always won especially when I sang. 

-Nicely done! I quite enjoyed learning something new whilst correcting this entry.
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National festival

I have seen many events in my life but I have one favorite. This is a national event called "Sabantui". This festival is celebrated in one part of Russia where live two nationalities - the Tatars and the Baskirs. This festival is dedicated to harvest time and land fertility.

The festival starts in the early morning and finishes about midnight. People celebrate in the countryside and in the forest.

There are three parts of festival: national jokes, food and a concert.

National food is based on lamb. This food is very fat and people eat it hot. There are also national drinks like herbal and medicinal tea and some milk drink specialities

In the concert people dance and sing. Children take part in a competition and sing national songs. The best singer wins many toys and sweets.

For adults there is a sports competition: a races with eggs, a battle with pillows, hopping in a sack etc. The strongest, the fast and most sporty win... sheep!
I like this festival. I have always taken part in all competitions and I have always won especially when I was singing.

Very well written and sung!

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