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I like beach I like beach because you can get a relax and have some time off from work. Book a luxury hotel to enjoy the equipments in it. Another way you can lay in the sand and get a tan. You can also play many kinds of sports activities. Such as skin-diving, sky-diving, deep-diving, banana boat, motorboat, etc. I played the skin-diving meanwhile you can see many colorful fishes and corals under the water. For the lunch, you can eat large varied seafood which are fresh and authentic. I like how the bikini girls and muscle men in the beach what is the one most beautiful things

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I like the beach ('beach' is always used with the definite article 'the')

I like the beach because you can relax and have some time off from work. Book a luxury hotel to enjoy the facilities in it. Another way is you can lay in the sand and get a tan. You can also do many kinds of sports activities. (it's always 'to do' with 'activities') Such as diving, sky-diving, deep-diving, banana boating, motorboating, etc. I did some diving during which you can see many colorful fishes and corals under the water. For the lunch, you can eat large amounts of varied seafood which is fresh and authentic. I like how the bikini girls and muscle men look on the beach which is the one of the most beautiful things
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I like beach

I like the beach because you can get a relax and have some time off from work. Book a luxury hotel to enjoy the equipments in it   amenities. Another way you can lay pass the time is to lay in the sand and get a tan (or sunbathe). You can also play  do many kinds of sports activities. S such as skin scuba-diving, sky-diving, deep-diving, banana boat, motorboat, etc. I played the skin-diving meanwhile you can see many colorful fishes and corals under the water. For the lunch, you can eat large varied seafood which are fresh and authentic. I like how the bikini girls and muscle men in the beach what is the one most beautiful things



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