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Writing and Speaking Moment I had done my thesis defense in English literature. It was definitely an unpredictable situation, I thought. So, I asked some my friends, who had early finished their final thesis defense, about what questions had been asked by examiners to them. Unfortunately, when my final defense came, I got some new questions and I suddenly thought that would be the worst thesis defense ever. I could simply write a sentence to show what my intention is by using standard pattern like subject, verb, and object, but in fact, I have difficulty to speak in delivering what my intention was. I thought that 'oh my God, it is not me', and it was obviously complicated situation to speak about my writing, about my sentences. I thought I could be failed and had to reschedule my thesis defense again. Then, I could only have thought what examiners thinking about me. Therefore, I realized that someone might had similar situation, especially for me as non-native English speaker, to deliver what his/her intention was when speaking. Is this writing can be comprehended either by native or non-native English speakers? Hopefully.

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Writing and Speaking Moment

I had done my thesis defense in English literature. It was definitely an unpredictable situation, I thought. So, I asked some of my friends, who had finished their thesis defense earlier, about what questions had been asked by the examiners to them. Unfortunately, when my final defense came, I got some new questions and I suddenly thought that that would be the worst thesis defense ever.
I could simply write a sentence to show what my intention is by using standard pattern like subject, verb, and object, but in fact, I have difficulty to speak in delivering what my intention is. I thought that 'oh my God, it is not me', and it was obviously a complicated situation to speak about my writing, about my sentences. I thought I could be failed and had to reschedule my thesis defense again. Then, I could only have thought about what the examiners are thinking about me. Therefore, I realized that someone might have had similar situation, especially for me as a non-native English speaker, to deliver what his/her intention was when speaking. Can this writing be comprehended either by native or non-native English speakers? Hopefully.


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Hi there! Good effort here, I can see that you really want to express your thoughts! However, try to write shorter sentences by splicing or dividing your ideas. The sentences come out to be quite complex if it's too long. Also, be careful with articles [a, an and the] and some verbs.

Hope this helps!

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