I missed my station
Every morning, I always takes the subway to work. I loves seeing Wechat on the subway. Last Friday, I glanced over the Wechat on the subway as usual. A funny message attracted me. I focused on it and completely forgot where to get off. After some time, the subway stopped. Looking round, I found there were few passengers in the carriage. hearing the name of that station from the radio, I realized with a shock that I had missed my station. In that case, I had to go into the subway from the opposite direction to my unit. Oh my God! I would be late again！
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I missed my station
Every morning, I always takes the subway to work. I loves seeingchecking Wechat on the subway. Last Friday, I glanced over the Wechat on the subway as usual. A funny message attracted distracted me. I focused on it and completely forgot where to get off. After some time, the subway stopped. Looking around, I found there were few passengers in the carriage. hHearing the name of that station from the radio speaker, I realized with a shock that I had missed my station. In that case, I had to go back into the subway from and go in the opposite direction to get to my unit office. Oh my God! I would be late again!--------------------------------------------
1. "Every morning" and "always" mean the same thing. Choose just one to use.
2. Instead of "seeing," use "checking," "reading," or "looking at." Those verbs sound more natural and show that you are actively engaged with the App.
3. A funny message "attracted my attention" or "distracted me."
4. I believe you are saying that you forgot to get off the subway, not that you forgot the name of your stop?
5. "I had to go back into the subway" tells the reader that you were already in the subway. "and go in the opposite direction" tells the reader the difference from before when you were in the subway. "to get to my office" tells the reader what the reason was for you going back into the subway.
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Teacher, thank you very much! I check it so many times, but also did not find these errors.The modification from you is so carefully and very helpful to me. Thanks again!
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