If I were an animal...
If I were an animal, I would be an orca. I like different animals like sloths, black panthers and wolfs, but definitly I would prefer to be an orca.
The first reason is that I would live in the sea and I would be able to swim everyday. In addition, I like their social organization: the way they hunt and how they protect their babies. I would eat lots of sea lions. Besides they are very nice animals.
If a were an orca, I would be swimming around the sea exploring everthing. Orcas are great swimmers, and because of that they are one of the best predators in the sea.
I think it would be a really nice life living in the sea, in the cold waters of the Antarctica.
(I appreciate if someone can corret this text. Thanks)
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If I were an animal...
If I were an animal, I would be an orca. I like different animals like sloths, black panthers and wolves, but definitly I would prefer to be an orca.The first reason is that I would live in the sea and I would be able to swim everyday. In addition, I like their social organization: the way they hunt and how they protect their babies. I would eat lots of sea lions. Besides they are very nice animals.
If a were an orca, I would be swimming around the sea exploring everything. Orcas are great swimmers, and because of that they are one of the best predators in the sea.
I think it would be a really nice life living in the sea, in the cold waters of Antartica.
(I would appreciate it if someone could correct this text. Thanks)
Almost perfect! Great job!!
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You write very clear and I don't see much to fix.
"I would live in the sea and I would be able to swim" can be simplified to "I would live in the sea and be able to swim."
"Besides they are very nice animals" needs a coma and is a little ambiguous since you have mentioned both orcas and sea lions. Better would be: "Besides, orcas are very nice animals."
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