Ways to be a wonderful person

A newspaper article said that learning English is also one of these ways. The aim is not to be a perfect speaker but to be a greater person. The article impressed him ever so much. He decided to study English as hard as possible so that he would become a wonderful wonder. He joined the ESS in the university. Doing club activities enthusiastically, he tried to make many friends. He did his part-time work very hard and volunteered for work for the Japanese Red Cross. Then he began to be lively. When he fell in love with a woman who was a member of ESS, his eyes began to sparkle. She had experience of living in the US, and her English was much better than his. In his freshman year at university, they went on dates many times and in his sophomore and junior years she attracted him steadily and in his senior year, he made up his mind to marry her. Though she liked him, she didn't love him. She said she couldn't get married to him but his English outgrew hers. Being heartbroken, he was very sad. At the same time he found learning English to be one of the good things in life and realized that he became so strong that he would deal with matters proactively in the future.

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Ways to be a wonderful person

The article said learning English is also one of the ways.The aim is not to be a perfect speaker but to be a better person. This article impressed him very much. He decided to study English as hard as possible so that he would be a more wonderful person. He joined the ESS at his university. Doing club activities enthusiastically, he tried to make many friends. He worked very hard at his part-time job very hard and volunteered for the Japanese Red Cross.Then, he began to be more lively. When he fell in love with a woman who was a member of the ESS, his eyes became sparkly.She had an experience of living in the US and her English was much better than his. In his freshman year at university, they went on dates many times and he grew steadily more attracted to her in his sophomore and junior year. she attracted him steadily and As a senior, he made up his mind to get married to her. Though she liked him, she didn't love him. She said she couldn't get married to him but his English had become better than hers. Being heartbroken, he was very sad. At the same time, he found learning English to be one of the good ways and realized he had become so strong that he could deal with matters proactively in the future.