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Why Is so Hot in China? Hello, everybody. My English name is Jeff. I have someting bad to share with you. I am living in Zhangjiajie city, which is located in westren Hunan province. The wherher there is extremly hot. Actually, There have been consecutively hot in China. From my perspertive view, this extremly hot is caused by human beings. We do many bad things to nature, and built up many factories, emiss CO2 to air which cause the earth is getting warmer and warmer from day to day. I am suffering the bad whether now. It is very uncomfortable. once I am off work and get back to dorm, and I get wet all over my body. We don't have air conditional, and we only have fan, but that do not work. my colleague did a test about the hot whether at 2:00-4:00, and that report showed our temperature in air reached 45 °, let alone on the earth.Oh, my godness. PLS help me out of this hell!! baibai.

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Why Is it so Hot in China?

Hello, everybody. My English name is Jeff. I have something bad to share with you. I am living in Zhangjiajie city, which is located in (the) western Hunan province. The weather there is extremely hot. Actually, it is always hot/this temperature is common in China. From my perspective view, this extremely hot weather is caused by human beings. We do many bad things to nature, and built up many factories, which emit CO2 to air which cause the earth to get warmer and warmer from day to day. I am suffering the bad weather now. It is very uncomfortable. once I am off work and get back to the dorm, and I get wet all over my body. We don't have air conditioner, and we only have a fan, but that does not work. my colleague tested/ measured the temperature at 2:00-4:00, and that report showed our temperature in air reached 45 °, let alone on the earth .Oh, my goodness. PLS help me out of this hell!! baibai.

Just a few mistakes. There are two words that sound the same "weather" and "whether"- they have different meanings and spelling. I hope that I helped :D

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Why Is It so Hot in China?

Hello, everybody. My English name is Jeff. I have some bad news to share with you. I am living in the city of Zhangjiajie, which is located in the western Hunan province. The weather here is extremely hot. Actually, there have been many consecutively hot days in China. In my perspective, this extreme  heat is caused by human beings. We do many harmful things to nature by building many factories and emitting carbon dioxide into the air, which causes the earth to get warmer and warmer each day. I am suffering from the bad weather now. It is very uncomfortable. When I get off work and get back to my dorm, I am sweating all over. We don't have air conditioning; we only have fan, but it doesn't work. My colleague checked the whether at 2:00-4:00, and he discovered our air temperature reached 45 °. The earth's temperature is even higher than that! Oh, my goodness. Please help me out of this hell!! Bye.
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By the way, the picture I show you is not zhangjiejie , and that is my hometown.

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