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IN THE PARK.. The family is in the park today.The weather is sunny and cool .It's a beautiful day. My father's he reading the newspaper. My brother's and sister are playing cards. My mother's she drink coffee.

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IN THE PARK..

The family is in the park today. The weather is sunny and cool. It's a beautiful day. My father's reading the newspaper. My brothers and sister are playing cards. My mother's drinking coffee.


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Hi! Good effort here! The weather seems very nice :) Please be careful with spacing after punctuation marks and the start of the sentence. Also be careful with using POSSESSIVE S ex That is my SISTER'S car, PLURAL NOUNS WITH S ex I have many PENS and CONTRACTED IS ex HE'S on his way.

Hope this helps!

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IN THE PARK:

The family is in the park today. The weather is sunny and cool. It's a beautiful day. My father is reading the newspaper. My brother and sister (you could use the word siblings here too) are playing cards. My mother is drink coffee.


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IN THE PARK..

My family is at the park today.The weather is sunny and cool .It's a beautiful day. My father is he reading the newspaper. My brothers and my sister are playing cards. My mother is she drinking coffee.

Hope this helps.

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