Traveling is the most exiting things in my life!
This is my fifth entry. Thanks for visiting and reading my diary. In this entry, I would like to tell you about some famous places which I want to visit in the US. Before getting into the topic, I would like to introduce the places to which I have been.
(1) New York city.
I think almost people probably know the city but New York city is located at East side of the US and one of the biggest city in the world. There are some places which you should visit as Times Square, architecture, Broad way and music and nice restaurants. Among of them, I like high architectures, which are also known as skyscrapers. They are very impressive. My favorite architecture is the New York symbol “Empire State bldg”. It’s amazing because it’s an old architecture built in 1931 whereas it has 102 floors. I strongly recommend to visit to there.
(2) Niagara Falls.
Niagara Falls is also located upside of New York state and far away from New York city, maybe ~5 hours drive away. Niagara Falls is a very beautiful and big fall. You can get on a small ship and enjoy cruising where you can see the fall from bottom of the fall. There is a huge river in which there is a border between the US and Canada. So you can see the falls from each country. Iced wine is very popular in the area and so nice. Iced wine is made from iced grape so as to make sugar concentrated wine, meaning that it’s so sweaty wine. I like it very much. Try it.
I would like to discuss other topics in my next entry.
If you can correct my English, that would be great! If not, no worries.
Thanks in advance!
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Traveling is the most exiting things in my life!
This is my fifth entry. Thanks for visiting and reading my diary. In this entry, I would like to tell you about some famous places which that I want to visit in the US. Before getting into the topic, I would like to introduce the places to which where I have been.(1) New York city.
I think almost most people probably know the city, but New York city is located at on the East side(East coast) of the US and one of the biggest cities in the world. There are some places which that you should visit such as Times Square, the architecture, Broad way, the and music, and nice restaurants. Among of them, I like high tall architectures buildings, which are also known as skyscrapers. They are very impressive. My favorite architecture building is the New York symbol the “Empire State building”. It’s amazing because it’s an old architecture building built in 1931 whereas and it has 102 floors. I strongly recommend to visit to there it.
(2) Niagara Falls.
Niagara Falls is also located upside north of New York state and far away from New York city, maybe ~5 hour drive away. Niagara Falls is a very beautiful and big waterfall. You can get on a small ship boat and enjoy cruising where you can see the falls from bottom of the fall. There is a huge river in which there is a the border between the US and Canada. So you can see the falls from each country. Iced wine is very popular in the area and so nice. Iced wine is made from iced grapes so as to make a sugar concentrated wine, meaning that it’s so sweaty a very sweet wine. I like it very much. Try it.
I would like to discuss other topics in my next entry.
If you can correct my English, that would be great! If not, no worries.
Thanks in advance!
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