A hot summer
This summer is very hot，I live in a small city nearby Nanjing .As is known to all,Nanjing is a very hot city in summer.But the temperature never until 38c.We can not leave the room ,we have to use the air condition and let the temperature come down.
I have my own studio and it is in my home .So everyday,I alaways use the air condition,long time use make me feel sick and headache.I want to the temperature can come down quickly,because i want to swimming in the outside swimming pool. I do not want my skin colour get brown.
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A hot summer
This summer is very hot，I live in a small city nearby Nanjing .As is well-known [to all], Nanjing is a very hot city in summer, but the temperature never until reaches 38C. We cannot leave the room, we have to use the air conditioner and/to let bring the temperature come down.I have my own studio and it is in my home. So every day, I alaways use the air conditioning; long time use makes me feel sick and gives me a headache. I want to the temperature can to come down quickly, because I want to swim/go swimming in the outside/open air swimming pool. I do not want my skin colour to get brown.
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A hot summer
This summer is very hot，I live in a small city nearby Nanjing. As everyone knows, (A more friendly way to say it)Nanjing is a very hot city in the summer. (When we talk about seasons we use "in the". For example: "I go fishing in the spring", "I always visit my mom in the winter")
But the temperature had never gone up to 38c. (Had+never+verb in past participle describes something happening now that never happened in the past. Example: "My dog had never bitten me!")
We cannot leave the room, we have to use the air conditioner and let the temperature go down.
I have my own studio and it is in my home .So everyday I always use the air conditioner, if I use it for a long time, it makes me feel sick and have headaches. (This is a cause and consecuence. For example: "If I sing, I feel happy", )
I want the temperature to go down quickly, because i want to swim in the outside swimming pool. (when we use to+verb the verb is in dictionary form, for example: "I like to run." "I want to dance")
I do not want my skin tanned. (tanned=skin getting brown)
I hope this helps :D, You are doing great! I understood the ideas on the text very well!
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