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lose weight The Summer was coming, looking at the beautiful dresses in the wardrobe, I planed to lose weight again. First of all, I wrote out a long list of all the foods which were forbidden. The list included most of the things I loves: chocolate, potatoes, barbecue, ice cream and other sweets .In addition, I made a schedule for daily exercises. I was so ambitious to get back my good shape. Five days later, a classmate living in other province travelled to my city and visited me on their way. She brought a lot of local specialty for me, and that was all my favorite. We played around and enjoyed delicacies together during the day, After going back home in the evening, I also could not help eatting the snacks. My husband shook his head and said: "it seems that you already abandon yourself!"

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Lose weight

The Summer was coming. Looking at the beautiful dresses in the wardrobe, I planed planned to lose weight again. First of all, I wrote out a long list of all the foods which that were forbidden. The list included most of the things I loves love: chocolate, potatoes, barbecue, ice cream, and other sweets. In addition, I made a schedule for daily exercises. I was so ambitious to get back my into good shape. Five days later, a classmate living in another province travelled to my city and visited me on their her way (back). She brought a lot of local specialties for me, and that was which were all my favorites. We played around and enjoyed delicacies together during the day. After going she went back home in the evening, I also could not help but eat eatting the snacks. My husband shook his head and said, "it It seems that you already abandoned your goal! yourself!"
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Teacher Claire, Thank you very much!
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Teacher Claire, Thank you very much!

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