Today is my birthday
When i was 12 ,i hope hold a birthday party and invied all of my friend .But now i am 20 years old .i like to hold the family meal in a way to spend a day of my birthday.
I think this is the meaning of birthday,
BTW: i wanna make a wish that i hope i can be independent and reduce the burden of the parents.
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Today is my birthday
When I was 12 , I hoped to have hold a birthday party. and I invited all of my friends .But now that I am 20 years old .I like to hold have the a family meal in a way to spend a day of on my birthday.I think this that is the meaning of birthdays.
BTW: I wanna make a wish that I hope I can be independent and reduce the burden of the on my parents.
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