A Thank you Letter It will be very grateful for correcting the following letter. (In my opinion, perhaps this sentence itself also need correcting. ) Hi Kathy Really glad to meet you in Cambridge.

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A Thank you Letter It will be very grateful for correcting the following letter. (In my opinion, perhaps this sentence itself also need correcting. ) Hi Kathy Really glad to meet you in Cambridge. My husband Tom and I both learned a lot about American Culture from your lessons. About the action plan, it is so considerate that you even spend time in order to find a website which names FutureLearn for me. Thanks a lot! That is also impressive that you do an awesome job to help people build their life as well as their business. Therefore, I also learned the persistence on learning and career pursuing from the conversation. I have a few friends who is considering building up a business in USA. If they need some consulting service, I wish I could recommend you as a coach if you are interested. I have marked your website and if you use LinkedIn, Facebook, or something like that, pls let me know. Hope we can talk more after I make some progress on my English someday later. We are so lucky to meet you when new here. Thanks! Best regards Icy

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A Thank you Letter

It I would will be very grateful for correcting if someone would correct the following letter. (In my opinion, perhaps even this sentence itself also need correcting. )

Hi Kathy

I was R really glad to meet you in Cambridge. My husband Tom and I both learned a lot about American Cculture from your lessons. About the action plan, it is so considerate that you even spend time in order you took the time to find a website which names for me (called SuperLearn). Thanks a lot!

That is It is also impressive that you do an awesome job to help helping people build their lifeves as well as their businesses. Therefore (therefore is a word that indicates cause and effect, so I wouldn't use it here. It isn't needed), I also learned to be persistent with the persistence on learning and pursuing my career** from the conversation. I have a few friends who is who are considering building up starting a business in the USA. If they need some any consulting service, and if you are interested, I wish I couldI 'd like to recommend you as a coach if you are interested. I have bookmarked your website and if you use LinkedIn, Facebook, or something like that, ***pls please let me know.

Hope we can talk more after I make some progress on with my English someday later. We are were so lucky to meet you when we were new here. Thanks!

Best regards,
Icy

不错！ Great job! A few general comments:
** Try to use verbs instead of compound nouns in English, it is usually a better style choice.

*** Avoid using Internet contractions like "pls", "TTYL", "CYA" and so on in a formal letter. It's OK to use these if you are chatting with friends.

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