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My last effort
Today, I went to my last English class, because tomorrow we will only have the final exam. I went on foot, because my car was being repaired. I was with my classmate and in the break, someone came to our place and took a photo of us. It is a beautiful keepsake of this course. Later, we came back to the class and finished the last lesson. Afterwards, I walked back to my house, and prepared my food/dinner.I would have walked the dogs for more time if I hadn't studied so hard. Furthermore, there was a lot of sun and it's very dangerous for dogs' paws.
Anyway, I have been studying since I arrived home. I need to learn some new vocabulary, and review verb tenses. I hope I pass the exam, because I need that to jump to the next level.
Good luck!
Hello Cristian,
You have tried some very high level language here and some of it is not quite right.
We often use the passive to describe what is happening to something without saying who does the action - 'be' (in the correct form) + past participle.
The third conditional is normally constructed with 'if + past perfect, would + have + past participle'
When you are talking about an action which started in the past and continues up to the present we use the present perfect continuous - I have been studying
Hope this helps, best wishes for your exam
Bob
My last effort
Today, I went to my last English class, because tomorrow we will have only the final exam (because the only thing we'll do tomorrow is take the final exam). I went on foot, because I had my car repaired. I was with my classmate and in during the break, someone came on to our place and taked took a photo to of us. It is a beautiful keepsake (tambien se puede usar: souvenir es mas commùn) of from this courses(this course/these courses). Later, we came back to the class and finished the last lesson. Afterwards, I walked back to my house, and prepared my eatingfood/meal.
If I didn't have to study so much/hard, I would have spent more time walking the dogs / I couldn't spend more time walking the dogs because I had to study so much. ,. Furthermore, there was a lot of sunit was very sunny and it's very dangerous to dog paw
it's very dangerous for the dogs' legs/paws
legs=piernas, paws=patas
Anyway, I have been studied I have been studying since I arrived home. I need to learn some new vocabuly vocabulary, and review verbal tenses. I hope I pass the exam, because I need that to jump to the next level.
Good luck!
My last effort
Today, I went to my last English class, because tomorrow we will have only the final exam. I went on foot, because I had my car repaired. I was with my classmate and in the break, someone came on our place and taked a photo to us. It is a beautiful keepsake of this courses. Later, we came back to the class and finished the last lesson. Afterwards, I walked back to my house, and prepared my eating.I had walked the dogs more time if I wouldn't have studied hardly, Furthermore, there was a lot of sun and it's very dangerous to dog paw.? This statement contradicted what you said earlier.
Anyway, I have been studied since I arrived home. I need to learn some new vocabuly, and review verbal tenses. I hope I pass the exam, because I need that to jump to the next level.
Good luck!
Today, I went for my English class, which was the last for us, because we will take our final exam tomorrow. I went on foot because my car was still under repair. During the break, when I was with a classmate of mine, someone came over to us and took a photo of both of us together. It is a beautiful keepsake of this course. Later, we went back to class and finished our last lesson. After class, I walked home and then cooked a meal for myself. I would have liked to walk my dogs longer if I hadn't had to study more.
Anyway, I have been studying since I arrived home after the walk . I need to learn some new vocabulary words and go through the verb tenses. I hope I will pass the exam, because I need to do that before I can advance to the next level.
My last effort
Today, I went to my last English class, because tomorrow we will have only the our final exam. I went on foot, because I had my car was being repaired. I was with my classmate and in the break, someone came on our place over and taked took a photo to of us. It is a beautiful keepsake of this the courses. Later, we came back to the class and finished the last lesson. Afterwards, I walked back to my house, and prepared my eating meal.I would have had walked the dogs more times if I wouldn't have hadn't studied hardly been studying so hard. Furthermore, there was a lot of sun and it's very dangerous to the dogs paws.
Anyway, I have been studied studying since I arrived home. I need to learn some new vocabulary, and review verbal tenses. I hope I pass the exam, because I need that to jump to the next level.
Good luck! Wish me luck!
Good luck! I hope you pass "with flying colours." :)
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