I had to wrote a couple sentences for tomorrow, please correct me. Thank you!
Barack Obama was the president of the United States for 8 years.
She didn't saw anithing, until she picked up her glasses.
He looked at her, winked, sayd goodbye, and quitted her life.
I still don't forget that September evening when I first saw you at the foot of the haystack.
When I was a little guy, I went to peep the girls at the workers' hostel's bath.
My best friend went out ( relationship) with her darling, when they decided to marry, what he did in spring in June, but they unfortunately they divorced in two months.
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I had to wrote [write] a couple [of] sentences for tomorrow, please correct me. Thank you!
Barack Obama was the president of the United States for 8 years.She didn't saw anithing, [see anything] ]until she picked up her glasses.
He looked at her, winked, sayd [said ] goodbye, and quitted [walked away from] her life. = this is not the correct way to re-write this sentence. Other ways exist.
I still don't forget [remember] that September evening when I first saw you at the foot of the haystack.
When I was a little guy ,[boy] I [would peep at the girls from] the workers' hostel's bath.
My best friend went out ( relationship) with her [his ]darling. when They decided to marry [in June], [during spring], what he [which they] did in spring in June, but they unfortunately they divorced in two months.[unfortunately, they divorced two months later]
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I have to write a couple sentences for tomorrow. please correct me. Thank you!
Barack Obama was the president of the United States for 8 years.
She couldn't see anything until she picked up her glasses.
He looked at her, winked, said goodbye, and left her life.
I still can't forget that September evening when I first saw you at the foot (at the bottom) of the haystack.
When I was a little guy, I used to peep on the girls at the workers' hostel's bath.
My best friend was going out with her boyfriend when they decided to get married. They got married in June, but unfortunately divorced two months later.
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I had to write a couple of sentences for tomorrow, please correct me. Thank you!
Barack Obama was the president of the United States for 8 years.She couldn't see anything until she picked up her glasses.
He looked at her, winked, said goodbye, and quit her life.
I still don't forget that September evening when I first saw you at the foot of the haystack.
When I was a boy, I went to peep at the girls in the hostel's worker's bath.
My best friend went out with his darling when they decided to marry, which they did in spring in June, but unfortunately they divorced in two months.
Very well written!
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