The world without Walt Disney
It is difficult to imagine the world without Walt Disney, probably the world would be less magical without him.
Not only kids but also adults love the stories of Walt Disney and it´s difficult found someone who didn´t know who was Walt Disney
If Walt Disney had never been born, we would not have dreamt with a lot of characters like Mickey Mouse.
The Disney world would never have existed and our vacations would have been less fun.
Most of the people enjoy going to the Disney World because it is a magical place.
This man inspired our imagination, so if he had never been born we might not have watched many cartoons or read many stories.
The animation movies would be much different than we know nowadays, probably less interesting.
In a nutshell the Disney world it´s a place where your dreams come true and it is a perfect place to go with kids, so it´s hard to imagine how boring the world would be without it!
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The world without Walt Disney
It is difficult to imagine the world without Walt Disney. Probably, the world would be less magical without him.Not only kids, but adults also love the stories of Walt Disney. It´s difficult find someone who doesn't know who Walt Disney was.
If Walt Disney had never been born, we would not have dreamt with a lot of characters like Mickey Mouse.
The Disney World would never have existed and our vacations would have been less fun.
Most people enjoy going to Disney World because it is a magical place.
This man inspired our imagination, so if he had never been born, we might not have watched many cartoons or read many stories.
The animation movies would be very different from what we know nowadays, probably less interesting.
In a nutshell, Disney World is a place where your dreams come true and it is a perfect place to go with kids. So, it's not hard to imagine how boring the world would be without it!
*Fernanda, I must say, this is an interesting and impressive read. You have a very good command of your tenses and use of words. You only need to practice more with writing (or speaking) for even more improvement.
A little thing to note though, Disney World is a brand name. The first letter of each word in it should be capitalized. Also, when using brand names, you should state them as there are usually written. e.g. CocaCola, Disney World, the White House, italki. Although, you can capitalize the first "i" in italki if it is the first word in a sentence. e.g Italki is a great language platform.
One more thing that I would recommend is to keep your sentences short and simple. It reduces room for error. It is one thing that any English would learn from a good teacher.
Hope this was helpful.
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