Description of a movie
Last week I was watching a movie. The name of the movie is Collateral Beauty.
It’s a drama story about man who lost his daughter. In the starring role is Will Smith. I like soundtrack of that movie and I’ve added that song to my playlist.
The general character (Will Smith) is Howard. At the beginning of the movie we could see how he told motivation lecture for his employees. He is successful, strong, self-confident men which leads his own company. He is surround friends and good people.
After that, we could see events two years later.
Howard was in depression. Hi didn’t want to work, lead people, live. He felt himself bad because his daughter died.
So, his the best friends decided to help him because he couldn’t handle loneliness and depression. They found actors, which should play three roles for Howard. These were Death, Time and Love. These actors did that very well, they played their roles and helped to solve some problems to Howard’s friends.
After that Howard started to visit club where people discussed their children which were lost. He communicated with woman, she lost her daughter too, but he didn’t talk about himself he just listened her story.
At the end of the movie Howard signed documents for saving his company (earlier he refused to do that) and came in to women house and we discovered that she was his wife and they told about their daughter earlier…
It was a good movie.
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Description of a movie
Last week I watched a movie called Collateral Beauty.It’s a drama about a man who lost his daughter, starring Will Smith. I like the soundtrack and I’ve added those songs to my playlist.
The main character (Will Smith) is Howard. At the beginning of the movie, he is giving a motivational lecture to his employees. He is a successful, strong, and confident man who leads his own company. He is surrounded by friends and other good people.
After that, we see events from two years later.
Howard is depressed. He doesn’t want to work, lead people, or live. He feels so bad because his daughter has died.
So, his best friends decide to help him because he can’t handle loneliness and depression. They found actors to play three roles for Howard. These were Death, Time and Love. These actors performed very well; they played their roles and help to solve some of the problems with Howard’s friends.
After that Howard joins a group where people discuss their children who have died. He talks with a woman who has lost her daughter too, but he doesn’t talk about himself he just listens to her story.
At the end of the movie Howard signs documents to save his company (earlier he refused to do that) and went to the woman's house and we discover that she was his wife and they had told us about their daughter earlier…
It was a good movie.
Very good, Nikolai! In describing an event or movie, keep it either in past tense or present (present is very common). I kept your writing in the present tense, except where you described the creation of the movie (the actors Death, Time and Love).
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