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Hi, please, help me to correct this text Dear children and guests of our graduation event. Good evening, everyone. Another year passed since singing cicada had climbed on the top of the tree, Another year passed since Dandelion’s children floated far away. This July comes the time when we are deeply grateful and take a tearful leave, This July comes the time that we worship on bended knees and feel broken-hearted at having to leave. Having enough rain and dew in our schoolyard let us quietly grow up our old seedlings in the cradle of the kindergarten and turn them into a thriving tree, what once was a little darling now has become an innocent and lively student. Today we have come together here in the kindergarten in order to take part in our big group’s 2017 year graduation ceremony ‘Thanksgiving growth, flying dream’. It’s the first graduation ceremony in children’s life, and it’s also an exceptional and symbolic event for them, their parents and our teachers. Tonight is going to be unforgettable. Now we have to go and load all the achievements we have collected during three years, load the deep feelings and emotions of our children and teachers, achievements, feelings and emotions flying in the vast land of hope. We wish we meet again when the spring is full, We wish we meet again in the forgotten but unforgettable glorious campus of our kindergarten Good bye dear teachers, dear children, dear kindergarten.

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