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Could you correct my book report ? Title : Little Witch Goes to School Characters : Little Witch, Mother Witch, Aunt Witch, Cousin Witch, Ms.Brooks teacher and Little Witch’s friends. Setting : At Witch’s house and at school. Problem : Little Witch had nobody to play with. Solution : Little Witch went to school and made new friends. Summary : Little Witch was bored. So she told her mother that she missed her friends. and wanted to go school. but mother yelled saying never say please. Little Witch asked mother that What if she promise to be good. but mother screamed saying she were already too good. and Little Witch asked again that what if she promise to be bad. and Her mother’s eyes twinkled and allowed her to go to school. Little Witch got a wormy apple for her teacher from aunts, a box of crayons from her cousin and a lunchbox full of candy from her mother on a first school day. Her mother told Little Witch that she shouldn’t make any friends. Little Witch got to school. She gave an apple to her teacher. but the worms popped out and teacher screamed. so Little Witch changed the apple to bananas with a magic spell. Little Witch used her crayons from her cousin but they’re all mixed up. one of her classmates liked the crayons and traded her crayons. In lunchtime, other friends like candies in her lunchbox. so Little Witch and her classmates gave and took their lunch. When It was time to go home, Little Witch was sad. but teacher told her she could came back the next day. Little Witch took everyone for a ride with broomstick after school. They landed in front of Little Witch’s house. Mother Witch screamed to see the children because she told Little Witch not to make any friends. so Little Witch sent her friends to their home and she felt sad. Mother Witch said to Little Witch that she was bad after all. Mother Witch was proud of her daughter. My opinion : I think Little Witch is a good girl and polite. Her mother was not kind and angry to her daughter but Little Witch tried to follow in her way. Little Witch also was a good friend to her classmates and a good student to her teacher.

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Could you correct my book report ?

Title : Little Witch Goes to School

Characters : Little Witch, Mother Witch, Aunt Witch, Cousin Witch, Ms.Brooks teacher and Little Witch’s friends.

Setting : At Witch’s house and at school.

Problem : Little Witch had nobody to play with.

Solution : Little Witch went to school and made new friends.

Summary : Little Witch was bored. So she told her mother that she was missing her friends and that she wanted to go school. But her mother started yelling never to repeat that again. Little Witch asked her mother what if she promised to be good, but her mother screamed she was already too good. Little Witch asked again what if she promised to be bad. Her mother’s eyes twinkled and allowed her to go to school. 
Little Witch got a wormy apple for her teacher from aunts, a box of crayons from her cousin and a lunchbox full of candy from her mother for her first day at school. Her mother told Little Witch that she shouldn’t make any friends.

Little Witch got to school. She gave an apple to her teacher, but the worms popped out and the teacher screamed so, Little Witch transformed the apple into bananas with a magic spell. Little Witch used her crayons from her cousin but they were all mixed up. one of her classmates liked the crayons so they made a deal and exchanged them. In lunchtime, other friends liked the candies in her lunch box so, Little Witch exchanged her lunch with her classmates. When It was time to go home, Little Witch was sad but the teacher told her she could come back next day. At the end,Little Witch took everyone for a ride in broomstick after school. 

They landed in front of Little Witch’s house. Mother Witch screamed when she saw the children because she told Little Witch not to make any friends. Little Witch sent her friends to their homes and she felt sad. Mother Witch said to Little Witch that she was bad after all and that she was proud of her.

My opinion : I think Little Witch is good and polite. Her mother was rude and angry to her daughter but Little Witch tried to do things in her own way. Little Witch was also a good friend with her classmates and a good student at school.

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