To the party's holder Mr Black.
Dear Mr Black,
I’m writing to you just because the party you held disturb me.
Every night you hold the party, you always cheer so loudly that I could hardly sleep when I am sleepy. I supposed it is you one-time party, however, you were continuously holding the partys. As you know, I very tired when I back home from my company so I really want a comfortable sleep for my next day. Unexpertedly, when I was already sleeping , the loud voice of yours woke me up, that my quality of sleeping falling away. To my honest, not only do I think it’s a trouble problem, but also our neighbors think. Therefore, I sincerely hope that you could solve this problem early that we could sleep sweetly.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bill Smith.
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To the party's host Mr Black.
Dear Mr Black, I’m writing to you just because the party you hold disturb me.
Every night when you hold parties, you are always so loud that I can hardly sleep when I am tired. I was hoping you would just a hold a party once, however, you have continuously been holding them. As you know, I am very tired when I return home from work, so I really want a comfortable sleep in preparation for the next day. Unexpertedly, When I am already sleeping , the loud voice of yours wakes me up, and that decreases my quality of sleep. To be honest, not only do I think it’s a troublesome problem, but our neighbors agree with me as well. Therefore, I sincerely hope that you can solve this problem immediately so that we can all sleep better.
Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Bill Smith.
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