Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
你好你好吗，你要做什么。我正在写一本杂志，这是关于游戏这有一百六页我都多杂志，关于游泳打篮球和游戏，因为它们对我有很大帮䢸帮我。我的杂志比其他杂志因为它有很多图片，信息和很有趣！在两个月内我发布我！的杂志，我很快乐！
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Are these sentence correct grammatically? Shahrooz
你好你好吗，你要做什么。我正在写一本杂志，这是一本关于游泳打篮球和游戏的杂志，并且它对我们有很大帮助。我的杂志比其他杂志好因为它有很多图片，信息都很有趣！如果能在两个月内我发布我的杂志，我将很快乐！Want to progress faster?
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