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First diary Hello. I am very beginner in writing by English. Please tell me English! I write three sentences. 1 Today,I read about 30pages of the book. 2 I made a cup of tasty tea. 3 I aspire to be able to read,write,hear and speak English.

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First diary

Hello.
I am a complete beginner in English writing.
Please teach me English!
I will write three sentences.

1. Today, I read about 30 pages of a book.

2. I made a nice cup of tea. ('Tasty' is normally used to describe food, not drink).

3. I aspire to be able to read, write, understand and speak English.

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First diary

Hello.
I am a very beginner in writing by English. ( I am a beginner in writing English.)
Please tell me English!
I will write three sentences.
1 Today, I read about 30pages from a of the book.

2 I made a cup of tasty tea.(I made a nice cup of tea. <-- This sentence sounds more natural)

3 I aspire to be able to read, write, hear understand and speak English.


Goodluck! :)

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