Two Friends want to make a gift to friend to brithday (1)
Meet Anrew and Bill. They are friend and they have an commom friend - Kate. Guys know how Kate works hard and she has not any time to celebrate her own birthday. She is an alone person. Guys see she is purposeful. Before for three day until beggining Kate birthday Andrew said:
-Well, you know Kate can spend her all life to job? She earns money for the good future, but all her job and all stress harasses her. I guess We need to do unforgettable birthday party she has even seen before! What does she like more?
- Let me think. Cats! She protects not also cats, allanimals, feed and health their.
- should we shelter a street cat?
-we should build a animal hospital. As fae aa I know she wants to do it all her life. Care aboyt animals!
- it is a great idea!
It is my first so work. I hope you do not think I am crazy. I have a good mood and I started writing it :))
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Two Friends want to give a gift to their friend for her brithday (1)
Meet Andrew and Bill. They are friends and they have a common friend, Kate. These guys know how hard Kate works and that she has no time to celebrate her own birthday. She is solitary. The guys see that she is purposeful. Three days before before her birthday Andrew said:-Well, you know Kate can spend her all life in her job? She earns money for the good future, but her job and stress harass her. I guess we need to give her an unforgettable birthday party like she has even seen before! What does she like most?
- Let me think. Cats! She protects not only cats, but all animals, feeds them and looks after their health.
- should we shelter a street cat?
-we should build an animal hospital. As far as I know she wants to do it all her life: care about animals!
- it is a great idea!
It is my first so work. I hope you do not think I am crazy. I was in a good mood and I started writing it :))
Very well written!
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