Past tense practice.
Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. The mall hadn't opened when I got there. After a while, the mall has opened when I was talking to my friends.
We just had a window shopping, because we hadn't anything to bought. After a minute later, I saw a T-shirt which is really have a good looking, so bought it.
At 12 o'clock, we both felt starve, so we devided to finding something to eat. We found a new restaurant that we had never tried before, so we went to the restaurant and had a good lunch.
After that, we went to my friend's home and called Mike came to play with us. Before Mike arrived, we had been playing video games.
I went back home at 22 o'clock, Such a busy day!!
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Past tense practice.
Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. The mall hadn't opened when I got there. After a while, the mall has opened when while I was talking to my friends.We just had a did window shopping, because we hadn't didn't have anything to bought buy. After A minute later, I saw a T-shirt which is really have a good looking looked really good, so I bought it.
At 12 o'clock, we both felt starve hungry, so we decided to finding something to eat. We found a new restaurant that we had never tried before, so we went to the restaurant and had a good lunch.
After that, we went to my friend's home and called Mike came to to come play with us. Before Mike arrived, we had been playing video games.
I went back home at 22 o'clock. Such a busy day!!
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Past tense practice.
Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. The mall wasn't opened when I got there. After a while, the mall has opened while I was talking to my friends.We were just had a window shopping, because we didn't really need anything to buy. After A minute later, I saw a T-shirt which was really great, so I bought it.
At 12 o'clock, we both felt hungry, so we decided to finding some place* to eat. We found a new restaurant that we had never tried before**, so we went there and had a good lunch.
After that, we went to my friend's home and called Mike to come to play with us. Before Mike has arrived, we had been playing*** video games.
I went back home at 22 o'clock, such a busy day!!
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* Notice the difference between "find something to eat" and "find some place to eat". In the first case, where would you search to find this something?
** Given the fact that the restaurant was a new one, it's redundant to write "that we had never tried before".
Also, notice:
a. A restaurant where we have never been before ('Try" a restaurant is not exactly wrong though)
b. A dish that we have never tried before
*** This is to signify that something has taken place (Mike has arrived) while something else has already been happening for some time (playing video games). Other options are also there, for instance: Mike arrived while we were playing video games.
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Past tense practice.
Yesterday, I went to the mall with my friends. The mall hadn't wasn't opened when I got there. After a while, the mall has opened when while I was talking to my friends.We just had a were just window shopping, because we we didn't need to buy anythinghadn't anything to bought. After aA minute later, I saw a really good-looking T-shirt which is really have a good looking, so bought it.
At 12 o'clock, we were both felt starve starving, so we devcided to finding something to eat. We found a new restaurant that we had never tried before, so we went to the restaurant and had a good lunch.
After that, we went to my friend's home and called Mike to come over and hang out (COMMENT: We don't say "play" for adults spending time together, but if it's casual, you can say "hang out") came to play with us. Before Mike arrived, we had been were (COMMENT: simple past tense is more suitable in this case since you were not playing video games for a long time) playing video games.
I went back home at 22 o'clock, Such a busy day!!
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