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I always wanted to jump from a plane with a parachute, but always found the word 'but'. Any trifle (or human) changes you and you can't be yourself anymore. One morning you see yourself differently in the mirror with different feelings and thougths. You comprehend it suddenly.
So i have gone away from my warm, comfortable house towords adventure and risk.
And now i stay at a field amoung other people like me. It's amazing:)! It's a place where I must always be - you feel unlimited joy like you became a child.Our instructor taught us elementary rules and techniques.
Now is the time - the crowd is going to the plane) I'm nervous. It's my first jump.
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Thoughts
I always wanted to jump from a plane? with a parachute, but always found the word 'but'. Any trifle (or human) changes you and you can't be yourself anymore. One morning you see yourself differently in the mirror, other self with different feelings and thoughtsSP. You comprehend it suddenly.So i have gone to my warm, comfortable house towardsSP (away from?) adventure and risk.
And now i stay at a field amongSP other people like me. It's amazing)! It's a place where I must be always be - you feel unlimited joy like you became a child. Our SPinstructor learned taught us with elementary rules and techniques.
Here and Now is the SPtime - all the crowd is going to old the plane. I'm nervous. It's my first jump.
The only definition for trifle which could be used in this paragraph is 'a thing of little value or importance'.
I'm guessing you mean to use it this way, but it doesn't work that nicely.
Line 4 - going to your house would surely be going away from the risk and adventure?
Only Russians recognise a smiley face as ")". For other people, you have to use a colon before it, e.g. ':)'
SP = Check your spelling/grammar or ensure you haven't capitalised a letter for no reason.
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