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The rainy season has finally ended. It is so hot and stuffy every day. But, there is nothing like enjoying "Hiyamugi" or "Hiyashi somen" at this time of year. Both are cold noodles. As you know, we can make slurping sound when we eat them in Japan. What is more, it is delicious. How about trying out it when you come to Japan?
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Summer
The rainy season has finally ended. It is so hot and stuffy every day. However, there is nothing more enjoyable than eating like enjoying "Hiyamugi" or "Hiyashi somen" at this time of year. Both are cold noodles. As you know, we can make slurping sounds when we eat them in Japan. Moreover What is more, it is delicious. How about trying it out it when you come to Japan?Hi Tatsuki,
Well written. If you wish to clarify why I corrected certain parts of your text, please feel free to do so.
Cheers,
Lance
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Summer
The rainy season has finally ended. It is (has been) so hot and stuffy every day. But (Usually don't start a sentence with "but". You can replace it with "nonetheless" or "however"), there is nothing like enjoying "Hiyamugi" or "Hiyashi somen" at this time of year. Both are cold noodles. As you know, we can (tend to) make slurping sound when we eat them in Japan. What is more, it is (they are)delicious. How about trying them out it when you come to Japan?Nice work! がんばってください。
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Summer
The rainy season has finally ended. It is so hot and stuffy every day. But, there is nothing like enjoying "Hiyamugi" or "Hiyashi somen" at this time of year. Both are cold noodles. As you know, we can make slurping sound when we eat them in Japan. What is more, it is delicious. How about trying it out it when you come to Japan?Congratulations! Good text, well written. Need a tutor to help you train your English grammar and pronunciation? Check out Easy English Today
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Summer
The rainy season has finally ended. It is so hot and stuffy every day. But, there is nothing like enjoying "Hiyamugi" or "Hiyashi somen" at this time of year. Both are cold noodle dishes. As you know, we can make slurping sounds when we eat them in Japan. What is more, it is delicious. How about trying out it when you come to Japan?0
Tiffany-san. I'd love you to do so. (^^)/
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