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I am going to live in London starting this summer.
Hello!I plan to live in London starting this summer with a YMS visa. I am really excited, but I feel insecure about some things as well. First, I am worried about my poor English. I have studied only American English, so when I watch movies with British English, I can not understand well what they say. Second, I am worried about the problem of money. My English friend told me that it is really expensive to live in London. If it is more expensive than living in Tokyo, I may not be able to handle it. Except for these (two) things, I am so excited.
I like the townscape(はい?)of London, the UK's music (例をお願いします), British movies (例), their personality (actually I don’t know well yet. (笑)), and the British-English accent. I am looking forward to seeing everything in the UK.
Thank you.
I will be happy if you make corrections to my sentences.
一行に一つの文だけを書くのをやめてくださいね。流れとてもいいです。
I am going to live in London from this summer.
Hello,Now I have a plan am planning to live in London from this summer with a YMS visa.
I am really excited, but I feel unsecure insecure about some things as well.
At first, First of all, I am worried about my poor English. I have studied American English, so So when I watch British movie, I cannot understand well what they say very well.
And second one Secondly, I am worried about is the problem of money.
My English friend told me that it is really expensive to live in London.
If it is more expensive than to live in Tokyo, I may not be able to handle it.
Except for these things, I am so excited.
I like the townscape of London, UK music, British movies, their personality(Actually I don’t know well yet.) , and the pronunciation of British English or something.
Anyway, I am looking forward to seeing everything in UK.
Thank you.
Your English is great! The mistakes you made were small and didn't really obstruct the meaning of the sentence, so you're on the right track. Good luck in the UK :)
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