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I have login at the italki after a long interval. Last month I went to South France and UK. It's my summer vacation. There are very beautiful place. I felt so happy and excited. But I think one thing. I should study english more harder. In the future I want to go to another country and lot of trips. Please check and correct my English. Thank you.

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I logged in to italki for the first time in a long time.

Last month, for my summer vacation, I went to south France and the UK. These are very beautiful places （二つの場所やから、複数形でしょう）. I felt so happy and excited (to be there?なんで？), but I realized one thing: I should study English harder. (moreいらないんです) In the future I want to go to other countries (一つの国だけじゃありませんよね), and take a lot of trips.


go to 「A」and 「B」　＝　go to 「A」 and go to 「B」.

だから　go to other countries and go to lot of trips となります。　「go to lot of trips」はちょっと違いますね。　他の動詞がいりますね。


another country と other countries

another country だと、いったところ以外もう一つの国しか行きたくないという意味になります。

other countries だと、ほかの国に行きたいです。これを言おうとしていましたよね？

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I have logged in at the to italki for the first time after a long interval.

Last month I went to South France and the UK.
It's was my summer vacation.
Therey are very beautiful places. I felt so happy and excited.
But I keep thinking one thing.
I should study english more much harder.
In the future I want to go to another country and take lots of trips.

Please check and correct my English. Thank you.
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I am  logging in to italki after a long interval.

Last month I went to the south of France and the UK for my summer vacation.
They are very beautiful places and I felt so happy and excited. But I think one thing.
I should study English harder.
In the future I want to go to another country and have a lot of trips.

Please check and correct my English. Thank you.

Hello Kotomi,

I am really glad you had a good holiday, I hope the weather was good for you as well! We use 'the' before positions and also before collections of countries/states so we talk about 'the United States' and the north of England.

Best wishes


Bob

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Hey, Kotomi, What a coincidence! I just did the same trip you did in July of 2014. I visited Montepellier and Lyon, which are a really nice cities in the south of France. The I went to UK for a week. There, I visited London and Liverpool, as well. What about you? Which cities did you visit in France and in the UK? See you soon, Pedro.

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