A phone message
A message for Paul
Hi, this is a message for Paul. Just to let you know that I´m going away next weekend. I´m going to meet my cousin Alex in Lisbon and I´ll be there for three days. But I need your help, my friend. If you could feed my cat, that would be great. You can go when you want, but if you could go around 10ish, it would be better. Thanks for that, my friend.
Bye.
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A phone message
A message for PaulHi, this is a message for Paul. Just to let you know that I´m going away next weekend*. I´m going to meet my cousin Alex in Lisbon and I´ll be there for three days. But I need your help, my friend. If you could feed my cat, that would be great. You can go when you want, but if you could go around 10ish, it would be better. Thanks for that, my friend.
Bye.
*"this weekend", or, "next weekend"? Please be careful with these slippery eels, as English speakers, I find, are ambivalent about them. I no longer say them and say the 22 July weekend. It's ugly, I know, but clear.
Otherwise, a masterstoke of English prose with no errors!
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A phone message
A message for PaulHi, this is a message for Paul. Just to let you know that I´m going away next weekend. I´m going to meet my cousin Alex in Lisbon and I´ll be there for three days. But I need your help, my friend. If you could feed my cat, that would be great. You can go when whenever you want, but if you could go around 10ish, it would be better. that would be best. Thanks for that, my friend.
Bye.
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