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daily-2- This is my second entry. Thanks for visiting and reading my daily. I’m trying to keep regularly writing a daily as far as possible. In the last entry, I forgot to introduce myself so let me introduce about me. I was born in Japan and grew up in a city which is at very countryside; it’s located at probably several hours flight away from Tokyo. I’m interested in life-science and actually working as a researcher. After I received my Ph.D., I decided to study abroad to train myself, look over the world and break my stereotype to get sophisticate vision. Fortunately, I succeeded to get an opportunity to work in the US. I have lived in the US for one year since 2016 and been plaining on staying for an additional year but it depends on my personal competency. I like traveling and I’ve been to several countries including US, France, Spain, Chile, Greece and German for some international conferences. My English is not good; I still need writing and speaking training to improve my English so that’s why I have just started italki. If you can correct my English, that would be great! If not, no worries. Thanks in advance!

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daily-2-

This is my second entry. Thanks for visiting and reading my daily (diary?). I’m trying to keep regularly writing a daily as far as possible.

In the last entry, I forgot to introduce myself so let me introduce tell you about me. I was born in Japan and grew up in a city which is at very close to the countryside; it’s located at probably several hours flight away from Tokyo. I’m interested in life-science and actually am working as a researcher. After I received my Ph.D., I decided to study abroad to train myself, look over see the world and break challenge my stereotypes to get sophisticated vision. Fortunately, I succeeded to get in getting an opportunity to work in the US. I have lived in the US for one year since 2016 and been plaining on am planning to staying for an additional year but it depends on my personal competency. I like traveling and I’ve been to several countries including US, France, Spain, Chile, Greece and Germany for some international conferences.

My English is not good; I still need writing and speaking training to improve my English so that’s why I have just started using italki.

If you can correct my English, that would be great! If not, no worries.
Thanks in advance!
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daily-2-

This is my second entry. Thanks for visiting and reading my daily. I’m trying to keep regularly writing a daily as far as possible.

In the last entry, I forgot to introduce myself so let me tell you something about me. [You don't "introduce about" someone or something] I was born in Japan and grew up in a city which is very countryside [not sure what you mean here.  If it is a city, it is not in the countryside.  "The countryside" means the rural  green country beyond the cities.  If it is a small city surrounded by countryside, you could say that.]; it’s located at probably several hours flight away from Tokyo. I’m interested in life-science and actually working as a researcher. After I received my Ph.D., I decided to study abroad to train myself, look over the world ["see the world" is more common] and break my stereotype to get sophisticate vision [I don't understand this.  What is your stereotype?  Are you supposed to be unsophisticated because you are not from Tokyo?  That seems rather silly, but I guess you could say that and explain how travel and education would make you more sophisticated and give you a vision for the future that biased people think "country" people don't have.. Fortunately, I succeeded in getting an opportunity to work in the US. I have lived in the US for one year since 2016 and have  been planning on staying for an additional year but it depends on my personal competency. [I don't know what "personal competency" means.  You mean being competent in speaking and writing English?  Or in your field of life-science?  Explain.] I like traveling and I’ve been to several countries including US, France, Spain, Chile, Greece and German for some international conferences.

My English is not good; I still need writing and speaking training to improve my English so that’s why I have just started italki.

If you can correct my English, that would be great! If not, no worries.
Thanks in advance!

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