JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.18th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was w

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.18th I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please? JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.18th At last night, I found myself to feel asleep. Actually, I really have regreted doing it yesterday just because I have something to do a lot like, of course studying the language and studying on my work or whatever. Yeah, anyway, I should have fell asleep yesterday. So, honestly, I am busy doing something that I shoud do yesterday normally, and to speak this kind of journal as of today, I would've do it yesterday lol So, now, I will think of why the person find themselves fall asleep. The reason why you kind of do it I guess is only one; you go to bed eventhough you don't really want to take a sleep yet because of somethin to do. But, once you closed your eyes, you would fall asleep immediately without realizing. Actually, this has a big risk, I think. There is a danger of what you couldn't set a timer as of tomorrow, so I mean, if you depended on some timers every morning to be up, you couldn't get up then. Plus, you might not go to your office or you were late to go there. At the last, you might lose somebody's trust like your boss or collegue. Just the thought of it makes me shiver.

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JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.18th

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.18th

Last night, I fell asleep. Actually, I really regretted doing it because I had a lot of things to do, like, studying language and studying for work. Yeah, anyway, I should have fallen asleep yesterday. So, honestly, I am busy doing something that I should have done yesterday anyway. Speaking of things I would have done yesterday, writing this journal is one of those things. So, now, I will think of why someone might fall asleep. The reason why, I guess, is once you go to bed it is natural to fall asleep for lack of anything else to do. Once you close your eyes, you fall asleep immediately, without realizing. Actually, I think this is a big risk. There is the danger of forgetting to set an alarm for the morning, so, if you depend on alarms every morning to wake up to, without one, you might sleep in . Also, you might not make it to your office, and if you do make it you would most likely arrive late. Lastly, you might lose somebody's trust, the trust of your boss or a colleague. Just the thought of it makes me shiver.

I tried my best to guess at what you might have meant. The bold font is used to represent how a English speaker might write the sentence. The highlighted words are corrections, usually, it was a verb in the wrong tense. It's not perfect, because I didn't want to change it too much. I hope most of this makes sense. If you have any questions about the corrections you can message me.Good job with the English!

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON JUL.18th(writing about falling asleep) Last night, I fell asleep. Actually, I really regretted doing it because I had a lot of things to do, like, studying language and studying for work. Yeah, anyway, I shoudn't have fallen asleep yesterday. So, honestly, I am busy doing something that I should have done yesterday anyway. Speaking of things I would have done yesterday, writing this journal is one of those things. So, now, I will think of why someone might fall asleep. The reason why, I guess, is once you go to bed it is natural to fall asleep for lack of anything else to do. Once you close your eyes, you fall asleep immediately, without realizing. Actually, I think this is a big risk. There is the danger of forgetting to set an alarm for the morning, so, if you depend on alarms every morning to wake up to, without one, you might sleep in. Also, you might not make it to your office, and if you do make it you would most likely arrive late. Lastly, you might lose somebody's trust, the trust of your boss or a colleague. Just the thought of it make me shiver.

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