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The two charts compare
the populations of France and India in terms
of age distribution by gender in the year of 1984.
It is clear
that Tthe population
of India is was clearly younger
than that of France, in 1984, with a noticeably larger percentage
of males and females ages d
25 and younger under 25. On the other hand, the proportion of elderly
people in France is was
significantly greater significantly. In India, the figures for
inhabitants under younger than five
5 years of age was marked
at nearly 14%, and the proportion of people ages d five 5 above to 70 was
increasingly smaller. By contrast, France’s population showed even distribution ed evenly in every age range
s, with around approximately
8% of people between the ages of infancy
and 40 years ages of less than a
year 0 and 40. Close to between 5% of French people were aged 65
years or older, while the equivalent
figures for India was only approximately around 2%. Looking more closely
at gender, the figure for French women it is was noticeably e that
were higher than that for men, as can be seen clearly in the
from ages 50 upward. In detail, French women between the ages d of
70 to 75 were at approximately about 3%, compared to under
less than 2% of men. The chart indicating the Indian population shows whereas
there were no significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian chart.
MY IELTS WRITING: the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984
My writing:
The two charts compare the populations of France and India in term of age distribution by gender in the year of 1984.
It is clear that the population of India is younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger percentage of males and females aged under 25. On the other hand, the proportion of elderly people in France is larger significantly.
In India, the figures for inhabitants aged under 5 marked at nearly 14%, and the proportion of people aged 5 above to 70 was increasingly smaller. By contrast, France’s population distributed evenly in every age ranges, with around 8% between the age 0 and 40. Close to between 5% of French people were aged 65 or older, while the equivalent figures for India was only around 2%.
Looking more closely at gender, it is noticeable that the figure for French women were higher than men, clearly in the age 50 upward. In detail, French women aged 70 to 75 were at about 3%, compared to under 2% of men, whereas there were no significant gender difference can be seen on the Indian chart.
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