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Walk in the park. In our city we have some beautiful places where we can walk in weekends. One of this place calls «Pinery». There are lots of high very old trees in this park. Mostly there are pine trees and birch trees. You can walk there all day long and you will not be bored because you can rent a bicycle and ride around the park. Also there are some entertainments for children such as swings and slides. If you have been walking there for a long time and you are starved, there is a café with different foods and refreshments. Someone do theirs sports in the «Pinery» and I think it’s very healthy to run and breathe fresh air. To keep fit you need to lead a healthy stile life and this park is the best place possible to do this.

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Walk in the park.

In our city, we have some beautiful places where we can walk on the weekends. One of these places is called «Pinery». There are lots of tall very old trees in this park. Mostly, there are pine trees and birch trees. You can walk there all day long and you will not be bored because you can rent a bicycle and ride around the park. Also, there are forms of entertainments for children such as swings and slides. If you have been walking there for a long time and you are hungry, there is a café with different types of foods and refreshments. Some people do theirs sports in the «Pinery» and I think it’s very healthy to run and breathe fresh air. To keep fit, you need to lead a healthy stile life style and this park is the best possible place possible to do this.
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A walk in the park.

In our city we have some beautiful places where we can walk on weekends. One of these places is called «The Pinery». There are lots of very old and tall trees in this park. Mostly there are pine trees and birch trees. You could walk there all day long and you wouldn't be bored because you can rent a bicycle and ride around the park. Also there are some entertainments for children such as swings and slides. If you have been walking there for a long time and you are starved [or "hungry"], there is a café with different foods and refreshments [logically-speaking, the cafe is there no matter how hungry anyone is :) But, this is how most people speak]. Some people do theirs sports in «The Pinery» and I think it’s very healthy to run and breathe fresh air. To keep fit you need to lead a healthy lifestyle and this park is the best possible place to do this.
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It's very beautiful scene! The trees are really tall!

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