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My Jounal July 16 Hi. This is Aoi. I'm Japanese and I live in Japan. I started wite my diary just today, I hope someonse will support my poor vocabulary and grammer! Let's move to my diary's content. My foreign friends and I went to Western musium to enjoy the exhibition about Arcimboldo. http://www.giuseppe-arcimboldo.org/ I guess he is one of the funniest artist in 16century. The woman's painting painted by flowers is the most famouse one. He painted a lot of portraits but most of them don't look like real human, but they looks like human even if they were formed by things of nature. It is once animals , fish, fire and fruits. We were so excited to watch the his excellent work that's why we were scold at least twice by art gallery stuffs. Aftar going the musium, we had a party at my friend's share house. we bought 10 pizzas and these pizzas filled with our hunger. I had a great time and I think could live such a nice day!!!!

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My Journal July 16

Hi. This is Aoi. I'm Japanese and I live in Japan. I started writing in my diary just today, I hope someone will support my poor vocabulary and grammar!
Let's move to my diary's content.

My foreign friends and I went to a Western museum to enjoy the exhibition about Arcimboldo.
http://www.giuseppe-arcimboldo.org/
I guess he is one of the funniest artist in the 16th century.
The woman's painting with the flowers is the most famous one.
He painted a lot of portraits, but most of them don't look like real humans, but they look like humans even if they were formed by things of nature. It was once animals , fish, fire and fruits.
We were so excited to watch his excellent works, that's why we were scolded at least twice by art gallery stuff. After going the museum, we had a party at my friend's share house.
we bought 10 pizzas and these pizzas filled with our hunger.
I had a great time and I think could live such a nice day!!!!



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My Jounal July 16

Hi. This is Aoi. I'm Japanese and I live in Japan. I started writing in my diary just today, I hope someone will support my poor vocabulary and grammar!
Let's move on to my diary's content.

My foreign friends and I went to Western museum to enjoy the exhibition about Arcimboldo.
http://www.giuseppe-arcimboldo.org/
I guess he is one of the funniest artists in the 16century.
The woman's painting of flowers is the most famous one.
He painted a lot of portraits but most of them don't look like real humans, but they look like humans formed/shaped by things of nature. for example animals , fish, fire and fruits.
We were so excited to watch the his excellent work that's why that we were scolded at least twice by the art gallery staff. Aftar going to the museum, we had a party at my friend's share house.
we bought 10 pizzas and these pizzas filled/satisfied our hunger.
I had a great time because i could experience such a nice day!!!!

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