Diary 16.07.2017
Andy Lau and Jacky Chang are both famous singers in HK. In performing arts, They can sing and act pretty well.
Andy Lau likes to associate with movies making, however, Jacky Chang quite seldom participate the movies making.
In the contrast with Andy Lau, Jacky Chang is keener on music performing and has more musicianship, moreover, he created his own musicals.
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Diary 16.07.2017
Andy Lau and Jacky Chang are both famous singers in HK. In performing arts, They can sing and act pretty well. they both can sing and act pretty well.
Andy Lau likes to associate with movies making, however, Jacky Chang quite seldom participate the movies making. Andy Lau likes to get involved with filmmaking, however, Jacky Chang seldomly participates.
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I would even re-phrase that sentence like this:
Andy Lau likes to get involved with filmmaking, however, Jacky Chang does not.
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Although Andy Lau has produced and acted in films, Jacky Chang prefers to stick with music.
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In the contrast with Andy Lau, Jacky Chang is keener on music performing and has more musicianship, moreover, he created his own musicals. Unlike Andy Lau, Jacky Chang is more of a musician; he is keener on performing, and has even written musicals.
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Diary 16.07.2017
Andy Lau and Jacky Chang are both famous singers in HK. In performing arts, they can sing and act pretty well.Andy Lau likes to associate with movies making is associated with making movies, however, Jacky Chang quite seldom participates the movies making movies.
In the contrast with Andy Lau, Jacky Chang is keener on music performing performance and has more musicianship is more of a musician. Moreover, he has created his own musicals.
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